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Showing posts with label Fresno Bee. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Fresno Bee. Show all posts

Sunday, January 12, 2014

Honoring the Saints


Belogradshick, Bulgaria - photo by JoAnn Sturman


Scott Sturman

Having never witnessed a progressive cause it could not support, the Fresno Bee is a good example of not only how the news is reported but what is reported and where it is displayed in the newspaper.  When check out time arrives, we ordinaries are remembered with a few words in the obituary section, tucked away in a cranny well back from the front page.  There is an equality in death and in the obit section; individual articles and pictures may vary in size, but a eulogy is a eulogy.  Does it really make a difference who has the biggest grave stone or mausoleum?  Politicians and the rich and famous are notable exceptions, but what is the Bee’s infatuation with the deaths of personal injury and criminal defense attorneys? 

When the Grim Reaper visits, few question front page publicity for a judge or legal scholar, but why the same treatment for professional litigators who sue anyone anytime, and whose phone numbers can be found in the back pocket of every dead beat in the community?  It’s not due to the public’s respect for the profession.  Just as nurses and firemen consistently rate as the most respected professions, the legal profession doesn’t fare so well with personal injury and criminal defense attorneys hovering at the lowest strata.

Perhaps even Joe the Plumber sees through the victims’ rights and reverence for the Constitution arguments and understands this stagecraft increases the cost of all products, services, and health care and is responsible for the explosion of regulations and rules.  Trial attorneys are bright people and realize tort reform, loser pays, and the broken jury system pays the bills, and the Bee clearly stands in their corner.  


   Belogradshick - photo by JoAnn Sturman

Thursday, October 11, 2012

News? Paper


Flowers at Ground Zero - photo by JoAnn Sturman

Scott Sturman
fliesinyoureyes.com
 

By its very name a newspaper delivers news to its readers.  This morning the Fresno Bee, one of the West Coast’s chapters of Pravda, deemed the Vice Presidential Debates hardly newsworthy.  The front page was plastered with old news about the Lance Armstrong doping scandal and color pictures of the Fresno Fair, but there was no clue that tonight two men with very different agendas would be debating in hopes of becoming the nation’s second highest elected official.

If one were not a political junky or simply inattentive to these matters, how deep would someone have to dig to find reference to the debate?  Surely by page two or three, a casual reader would discover something relating to the event.  Alas, it was not until page seven where a 2x2 inch box located in the bottom right corner of the page alerted the readers about the nationally televised debate.

Journalism is not so much about news nowadays, but propaganda.  I imagine if the editors of the Bee thought bumbling Joe would take Paul Ryan to the woodshed tonight, the debate time would be displayed front and center on page one.  Yet they know as well as any the patented Biden smirk and bullying behavior will be in full force, so it is best to pretend the debate never happened. 



Aftermath of the Great Vice Presidential Debates

“Riches and fame make a gentleman not.”  - W.R. Priskna

The morning after the great debate Pravda's front page was adorned by a color photo of the event.  The editors, hoping none of their readers had seen the debate, lavished praise on battling Joe Biden.  He was tough and in command of the fact; just the type of man who should help lead the country.

Ask any expert in the field of body language, and they will testify that rolling eyes and laughing at another’s seriously intended comments shows utter contempt and disdain.  Joe Biden’s Cheshire Cat smirk and bullying tactics at the Vice Presidential debates were reported by the main stream media as a demonstration of aggressiveness, but most viewers with any sense of manners preferred the terms arrogance and rudeness.

The morning after the debate I was working with a group of women who are not usually politically oriented but nonetheless watched the contest between Representative Ryan and Vice President Biden.  To a person they were appalled by the Vice President’s boorish and immature behavior.  “He made a fool of himself,” one noted.  “It was Paul Ryan who kept his poise and acted like a gentleman.”

The weekend talk show experts seemed to have missed the point, as well.  The central issue was not controversial moderator Martha Raddatz or the flurry of facts flying back and forth between the two candidates.  The debate was defined by Biden's outlandish behavior and taunting demeanor reminiscent of the National Football League of old.    

Despite the spin, Joe Biden did not help his party’s cause.  Most of those who watched the debate saw a soon-to-be septuagenarian stuffed in an expensive suit, who conducted himself like a street fighter rather than a statesman.



   Tibet - photo by JoAnn Sturman

Sunday, September 19, 2010

Bonfire in Fresno

Western route on Mt. Kilimanjaro - Tanzania

Scott Sturman
fliesinyoureyes.com

It could be seen coming from a mile away, like the left hook from an aging boxer. A tragic motor vehicle accident occurs leaving three young women traveling in a SUV dead after being hit by a Greyhound bus at 2 AM on Highway 99. Also dead are the 57 year old bus driver and two of his passengers. The story hit the front page of the Fresno Bee the very next morning, but strangely enough the article focused almost exclusively on one of the passengers in the SUV – a twenty year old unwed mother with a three month old infant at home. All the other victims virtually were ignored, but the implication could not be more clear: an innocent mother died as a result of the negligent conduct of a bus driver working for a major company.


According to initial accounts, the three young women aged 18-20 were clubbing at one of local hot spots. They left the establishment in the wee hours with the 18 year old at the wheel. Shortly thereafter, the driver missed an exit off Highway 99, and while swerving to correct the error, rolled the vehicle which literally bounced over the concrete center divider into on coming traffic. (I saw the impact site several days later. The force was so great that a large chunk of cement was knocked out of the barricade.) The SUV with lights extinguished came to rest on its side with only its under carriage exposed to the bus.

The newspaper article written by two of the Bee's stellar writers was right out of Tom Wolfe's Bonfire of the Vanities, where the details of a tragic hit-and-run fatality are exaggerated by a reporter in order to gain the most literary attention possible. In this fictional case a well-to-do motorist driving late at night in a luxury sedan takes the wrong turn off of a freeway in New York City and finds himself in a very tough ethnic neighborhood. He instantly is surrounded by menacing young men who recognize his vulnerability. Fearing for his life, the driver finds the on ramp to the freeway and presses the accelerator to the floor. In the process he hits and kills an innocent pedestrian who is using the poorly lit ramp as a walkway. When a newspaper reporter investigates the accident, it turns out the victim was a recent high school graduate with a mediocre academic record and a history of some minor brushes with the law. Since this resume does not have the proper amount of pizazz to sell newspapers, the reporter decides to extrapolate. As it turns out, the young man once had an “A” in one of his classes in high school, so in the article he becomes “an honor student.” Despite being unemployed and not attending college, one of his friends tells the reporter that the victim once told him that he wanted to be a doctor and go to an Ivy League school. This morphs into a more engrossing commentary: “A high school honor student bound for Harvard to study medicine was struck and killed in the prime of life by a hit and run driver ...”

The Fresno Bee article followed a similar path. The centerpiece of the story is the young woman did not want to go night clubbing and leave her three month old daughter at home, but her family insisted she go out and have a good time. We are lead to believe she called home every 15 minutes to check on her baby but was told by her relatives who were baby sitting to relax and stop the incessant calling. The narrative is written in a style which infers this conduct represents normal parenting skills. We are told she had a boyfriend who she planned to marry and at some point intended to pursue her education. Next to the article is a well composed color picture of a very pretty young woman which overwhelms the blurry smaller photos of the other two young women and the bus driver, who similarly are treated as afterthoughts in the story.

A few days later as the case unfolded, it was discovered the driver of the SUV had been drinking. Apparently, all three women survived the initial crash and were struck by the bus as they attempted to escape from the wrecked vehicle. Questions were raised whether the bus driver, who was sober and had an exemplary 32 year driving record, was driving too fast. Imagine driving a bus on a dimly lit highway at 2 AM. How could one possibly see a wrecked vehicle laying on its side without lights and passengers fleeing from it? It is just too easy to vilify a dead man who had a family of his own and a solid reputation.

A number of follow up articles appeared over the ensuing weeks. Not surprisingly some of the Greyhound passengers intend to sue the bus company, because they thought the bus was traveling too fast. Evidently, they possessed some sixth sense which allowed them to determine the speed of the bus, although it was late at night and they were seated in the dark passenger compartment. Curiously, the negligence of the SUV driver was minor compared to that of the man who did his best to save their lives.

The accident is an unmitigated tragedy, but the Bee once again shows it more interested in selling newspapers than dispensing the truth. At some point personal responsibility matters and blaming others does not. When the story broke, the reporters' first probing questions were directed away from the young women: “Did the dance club serve them liquor? How do the owners insure under age party goers do not drink? Was the bus driver driving too fast? Had he been drinking or using drugs? Was he a competent employee?” But ask any conscientious parent and another set of questions would have been posed: “Why was the mother of a three month old baby partying at two in the morning? If her younger friend had been drinking, why did she let her drive? Why would her parents encourage irresponsible behavior?”

The plaintiffs' attorneys already smell blood, and they do not have the driver of the SUV in the cross hairs. They are going after Greyhound who has deep pockets and something to lose. They do not care if they destroy the reputation of a hard working driver with a commendable record who spent an unblemished career safely transporting his passengers along America's highways. It is all about money and shifting the blame.
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